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UK English Oxford Style Editing Skills MCQs

Read the following closing paragraph of an Internet-based business-to-consumer sales letter and select the option that illustrates the best course of action for an editor to take.
So are you ready to get your head out of the weeds? CLICK HERE to order your Garden Guru Deluxe package and FREE GardenFriend Tool Belt, and join more than 100,000 other hard-working people who now spend their weekends playing instead of pruning! And just to sweeten the pot, I'll take off an additional 30% if you order before 10th of December. You can't beat that with a stick!
Weedlessly Yours, Jay Appleseed President, Garden Guru Inc. P.S. I have your deluxe Package and FREE gift ready to send to you. After you order using your credit card, I'll send you your tracking number and full instructions. Click here to order

For the sake of credibility, strongly suggest that the author back up his claim that '100,000 people' own this product.

Change instances of ALL CAPS to sentence case or lowercase as appropriate.

Recast the entire closing to eliminate humour.

Delete the unprofessional 'P.S.'

None of the above actions are necessary. Though it may benefit from a little tweaking, this closing is acceptable.

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None of the above actions are necessary. Though it may benefit from a little tweaking, this closing is acceptable.

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